20.10.2009
And I have the first story… The initial name is “Benches”
it is very simple – one thought in fact. Well - as I wanted, actually! It is about our Heart and some people, with whom we share our hearts (friends, soul-mates and the other nice or important for us persons). The Idea is like this – our soul I see as an endless field with the high grass (for me-it is wheat), on the shore of the river (it could be an allegory for time).We are sitting on the shore – looking at the river – living our life. But we are not alone – there are so many creatures -watching the river too. For some of them we have special places in our soul-field, only for them… We build a Bench (figuratively) for that person – and from now on that place in our Heart is somehow shared – it is not only “My” but more - it is “His” (Her) as well. When he is near – he sits there on the Bench with us and we face the river flow down, together… When he is not there -we feel empty, sometimes maybe even lonely… But that Benches, that heart sharing, make our soul more deep and beautiful, that places links us to the other souls, because there are benches for us in people’s hearts…
But in the end – there should be no words - only pictures. Words make things heavy – and words lie, I want people understand and feel the idea by themselves, in their own way… I want to make no conclusions …
Character -? - Not sure yet… yes very important to find one – human/animal/something
1) /River line /Field from above /he is running there so small/
2) /he from the back on the river/
3) /his face (kind of inspired)/
4) /(close-up) eyes, smile/
5) /perspective – nice stuff/
6) /lying down the field – enjoying the view/
7) /sky with the bird flying very high, clouds/
8) /started to rain, far view/
9) /surprised face with the drops falling on it/
10) /he is trying to cover with leaves, be safe from the rain/
11) /close up/we see sun in his eyes reflected/
12) /sky, clouds, small rain, SUN/
13) /we see rainbow on the other shore/
14) /he sees it ,view from far/
15) / open-mouthed with astonishment, close up -pointing the rainbow with the finger/
16) / eyes/
17) /look back, searching for someone to show the rainbow /
18) /someone’s ears jut out the grass/
19) /”Hey, U pssst!” –he says/
20) /we see second character-“Me?”/
21) /”Yes, U come here”,-convincing look/
22) /standing together, the first pointing the rainbow/
23) /close-up - 4 eyes amazed/
24) /view from above – 2 talking, playing/
25) /next day//the first building smth with the hammer/
26) /enjoying the view of the new Bench for a friend – satisfied/
27) /close-up, looking for his friend/
28) /ears in the grass/
29) /next week//sitting together on the bench – dangle the legs/
30) /vie from above with the field, bench, 2characters, river/
31) /next month// grass ,ears, waving “chao” hand/
32) /character sitting alone on the bench – sad/
33) /close-up –sad eyes/
34) / empty bench, he is going to the field/
35) /river flowing down/
36) /100 years later//old character sitting on the shore of the river/
37) /close-up wise old face with the shadow of the smile/
38) / he is sitting down the first bench, we see smth vague in the background/
39) /view from above, river, field, many benches (all different),chairs, sofa, cradle, couple of beds…/
40) /zoom out - we see the field and the river and smth small there(his life)/
41) /zoom out –planet/
42) /zoom out – stars/
43) /zoom out – seed/
44) /field/
So many points, o my god))) not so sure about the last 4 points - maybe they are too much, not sure that the character should be alone in the end...I better clean up my scenario - later… it s too long I think! We all know – Less is more!
I like it!
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